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5 of the most effective LinkedIn headlines you should be copying

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by Jennifer Bridges  @JenBridgesRD

Your LinkedIn headline is one of the first things people see when they visit your profile. As such, it has the power to make a strong first impression on employers, clients, and those looking to connect with you—but only if your headline is well written.

To look your best and stand out from the crowd on LinkedIn, your headline needs to:

  1. Contain the right keywords
  2. Explain your unique value proposition
  3. Use strong adjectives
  4. Be specific
  5. Be (appropriately) creative

Here are some examples of headlines that are doing everything right, as well as some tips for what not to include in your headline.

1. Teodora Stancheva- Contains the right keywords

20 million people, including hiring managers and recruiters, use LinkedIn’s search feature each week. To increase your odds of appearing in these searches, your headline needs to use the keywords these people are searching for.

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Teodora Stancheva, for example, strategically uses key marketing terms—like SEO, growth marketer, and AI—in her headline. This makes her more visible to recruiters interested in those marketing niches.

If you aren’t sure which keywords you should be using, there is an easy way to discover them. 

  1. Look at job descriptions for positions that you’re interested in.
  2. Identify which terms and phrases appear most often. These are the keywords you should be using.

You can check to see if your keywords are working by seeing how often your profile is appearing in recruiters’ searches. Go to the Dashboard section of your profile and click “Search appearances.” This will show you how many times your profile has come up in the search results during the past week. At the bottom of this page, you can see which keywords your searchers used to find you.

2. Julia Bramble – Explains your unique value proposition

To make your headline more impactful, you need to tell people what makes you special. Think of your headline as free advertising for your personal brand. 

Julia Bramble’s headline is a good example of a LinkedIn headline that promotes your personal brand. It not only explains what she does and who she does it for:

“I help experts & leaders turn social media into an asset that amplifies their brand, attracts the right people & supports business growth.” 

But it also highlights her unique personality, which humanizes her and makes her stand out from her competitors:

“Sometimes posts about ducks.’”

If you need some inspiration to create or improve your personal brand, check out this list of 10 best personal brand statements

3. Jake Seeley – Uses strong adjectives

The last thing you want your headline to be is boring. Recruiters see dozens, if not hundreds, of dull headlines every day. To stand out from the crowd, you need to enhance your job title with attention-grabbing words that give viewers a clearer picture of who you are and what you have to offer. 

When you look at Jake Seeley’s headline, for example, the words rigorous, relevant, and engaging paint a vivid picture of a competent and driven professional.

Here are some other strong adjectives to use:

  • Conscientious
  • Energetic
  • Focused
  • Genuine
  • Imaginative
  • Innovative
  • Insightful
  • Meticulous
  • Perceptive
  • Persistent

4. Meghan Downs – Is specific

The more specific your headline is, the more interesting it is to read. As such, you can easily make your headline more compelling by including lots of details. 

Meghan Downs’ headline is a good example of how to grab the reader’s attention with details. It not only lists the three types of clients she helps:

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“high-end service providers, designers, and creatives”

 But it also tells you exactly what she does for them: 

“helping you to tell your story so ideal clients think, ‘Hell yeah, YOU are who I need’.”

If you are finding it difficult to think of any details to include in your headline, try asking yourself these questions:

  • What accomplishment are you most proud of?
  • What type of businesses or individuals do you serve?
  • What tactics do you use to help your clients or employers?
  • What are you most passionate about?

5. Henneke Duistermaat – Is (appropriately) creative

What type of LinkedIn headline would you rather read—a dull, dry list of skills or something creative and (perhaps) humorous? If you’re like most people, you’d prefer the creative headline because it engages you emotionally.

A great example of a creative LinkedIn headline is Henneke Duistermaat’s

“Irreverent writer & coach on a mission to stamp out gobbledygook.” 

While the headline lets people know what she does (write), the words irreverent and gobbledygook make readers chuckle and give people valuable insight into Henneke’s quirky personality.

However, creativity and humor don’t always work in a LinkedIn profile headline. You need to consider what would be appropriate for your position and the industry you work in before including anything too whimsical.

Headline mistakes to avoid

Part of learning how to improve your LinkedIn headline is knowing what not to do. If you want to make the best possible first impression, you should avoid doing the following:

Only mentioning your current job title and/or company

The default headline on LinkedIn is your job title and the name of the company you work for. If you leave this headline unchanged, then you are likely to get lost in the sea of “title/company” headlines.

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One way to stand out from the crowd is to describe what you do using different wording. So, instead of a boring headline like:

“Director of Business Development at Company X”

Your headline might look more like this:

“Creative Collaboration for Unprecedented Business Development in These Challenging Times”

Using jargon or trite phrases

You only have 220 characters to work with. Therefore, you need to make sure every word makes a strong impact.

A good way to ensure you are being as clear and concise as possible is to get rid of any filler words, like very, highly, really, just, and that. They don’t add any value and merely take up space.

Another method of weeding out the fluff is to eliminate jargon or generic buzzwords that are so overused, they’ve become trite. Here are some good ones to watch out for:

  • Specialized
  • Experienced
  • Skilled
  • Results-driven
  • Synergy
  • Expert
  • Leader
  • Motivated
  • Successful
  • Team player
  • Think outside the box
  • Detail-oriented
  • Track record

Advertising your unemployed status

If you’re seeking a new job, you might be tempted to include phrases like “currently unemployed,” “looking for new opportunities,” or “seeking new position” in your headline. But this is a bad idea for several reasons.

For one, recruiters aren’t searching for these phrases when they are scouting for candidates, so you are reducing your visibility by using them. You can always let employers know you’re looking for a new role through LinkedIn’s Open To Work feature.

Also, these phrases don’t tell people anything about you. You’d be better off filling your limited headline space with words and phrases that better convey your skills, abilities, and something of your personality. 

Next steps

At this point, you should understand the basics of what makes a LinkedIn headline great.

However, improving your headline is only one step in making sure your LinkedIn profile presents you in the best light. To ensure you reap all the benefits that come from having a stellar LinkedIn presence, you’ll need to upgrade all the other sections in your profile.

Here are some articles that can help you do so:

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